Wraithbait

I love your threesome! Very hot!

Nice. I like adding Lorne to Sheppard and McKay. It's like a whole new flavor! I don'tusually go for Sheppard in ontrol in these scenes, but I like your understated, dominant Sheppard.

BRAVO!

I..wow..I'll just be...over there...in my bunk...

Oh, wow.
I am loving this! I think it's a great continuation of the first one (which I loved dearly!!) and I hope that you'll continue!

guh... I think you broke me.

oooh this was delicious! I love blindfold blow-jobs!.Definitely want to read more of this!

you are just so made of win right now. fantastic. its mcshorne, completely squee worthy!!! i cannot believe you have done a sequal to my most favouritist mcshorne ever. it was beautiful. lorne and shep at the end, and blindfolded blowjobs, and just, wow. thanks, that was brilliant.
branny

Yay. I liked the first fic, so I'm glad to see an addition to that 'verse. This was incredibly hot and sensual. I hope to see more- Lorne's still got to figure out what's going on after all ;).

Laura.

I have third degree burns now from the hotness of this! *dabs at sweat drenched forehead*

LOVE IT! That was so increadibly hot! Uh, that was just amazing. Poor clueless Lorne. I love how John completely controls Rodney, and Lorne just hangs on for the ride.

*fans herself*

hot hot hot!

FILTH! Look everyone, she wrote us filth! Hurrah!

I think you broke my brain - and in less than 1000 words no less. hope you write more with these three. it's exceedingly hot!

This was incredibly hot!! And I love the ending...so sweet.

wow, that was really hot

A prequel and a sequel, please

Nane

If I were stranded on a deserted island with nothing but stories like this for relief, I would be satisfied.

The only thing that needs to be figured out in the morning, Lorne, is who gets to be in the middle next ;). This was so very hot and I loved virtually silent!Rodney and John just *looking* at Lorne and expecting him to know what he was thinking. I'm glad Lorne made the right call over John's last *look* :).

Laura.

OMG,that was so hot I'm in pain. I love how Sheppard claims them both. Physically and emotionally. Thanks for sharing.

Guh...you just hit my biggest, fool-proof kink square on the head, and made it something beautiful and touching in the bargain. Thank you!