Reviews For Cedar's VS-5

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Reviewer: fangirl29 (Signed)
07 Aug 2010 4:46 am
Nooooooooooooo! There's a reason I try to avoid wips, but you had me at Major Lorne...I need to know what happens to him!!! I hope you find your muse soon so that you can continue such a well written story. The details, dialogue, and story line are wonderful. Please keep writing. I hope to read an update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review. The series is a lot further along on my personal website, because it is so difficult to post stories here. If you look for 'cedarfiction dot net' you can find the website. There are 10 completed stories, some of which continue the arc begun in Harm's Way, and reveal more of Lorne's fate. Many thanks for your kind words. Eirian
Harm's Way
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Anonymous)
20 May 2009 11:54 pm
"You know that old saying,

And then the rest of the text was missing again... In my correct Word file, the one taken from your site, I have the first sign of a tag standing there, and that's probably what tricked the rest not being here. So a part text missing here, a sign that shouldn't be there on your site.

Poor you without me.

Just checking, you do still have my e-mail addy, right? It's been 14 days... :D


Author's Response: Yes I do... but with computer access until now being somewhat difficult I thought my priority should be finishing up BTT... I'm almost there. Just on Act 5 right now... I corrected the coding error and now everything should be all right. Thank you :D
Reviewer: GoSpikey (Anonymous)
16 May 2009 7:00 pm
Eirian, please check Enmity Act 3 the ending. This is not the way my Act 3 ends. There's a chunk missing, I think. The part where Teyla runs away and goes to Lorne... And the fight against the Wraith.


Author's Response: Damn it, you're right. There's a whole chunk missing from the end. How did that happen, and why did no one else pick up on the fact that there must be stuff in Act 4 that won't make sense because of it. Thanks, my friend. What would I do without you?
Reviewer: amandasnow (Signed)
16 Apr 2009 2:16 am
Very nice job with this story. It was a little difficult to understand in the beginning. Not a happy story but certainly a thought provoking one. I love the idea of all the disparate characters brought together in one story. I also have toyed with the idea of evolution of wraith and would like to see your take on that one. But all in all in a fabulous story. Better than 95% of those I've read. It was intelligent and the dialogue true to the characters. Thank you for giving us a new version of the old Michael and Teyla story as well as adding Todd and a elder wraith queen into the mix. I've always thought that with tens of thousands of years to play with that there should be a hierarchy of age with the wraith, especially the Queens. Thank You for your story. I enjoyed it immensely and couldn't stop reading it once I started.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. I assume you did read Enmity and Mantle before this one? (it being the third of a 'three-parter'?) Still thank you again. The hierarchy will continue to be explored through the rest of the series.
In Truth... Freedom
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