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Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
26 Sep 2011 12:33 am
Interesting so far - but I am curious, how and when did she get pregnant and why is gestation so long, she's not an elephant. Its seems like it is a couple of years and no way would I like to carry a baby that long!

Author's Response: As the story progresses why the gestation takes so long will be explained. I give one now because it would be a spoiler. As for when she became pregnant it was from her encounter with Michael in the story Everything. :)
Something
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
25 Sep 2011 7:48 pm
Great story, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: The chapters are coming to me a lil slower these days primarily due to a 16 credit course load. I'll try to post at least a new chapter every month-sorry for the delay but sooo busy with school atm.
The little one
Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
24 Sep 2011 10:11 am
This is a very interesting story and am looking forward to reading it. For your information, the wraiths feeding hand is always on their right hand, their left hands are clear of the feed slit. You can check this out on Gate World @ Wraith Defenders Club. Where it has been discussed extensively.
Am looking forward to reading the rest soon. :)
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Reviewer: All4Wraith (Signed)
24 Sep 2011 9:49 am
Just read through this story, sounds very interesting. Can you also add this to the site Fanfiction.net. I only on occasion come here when looking for wraith FF, as there really isn't much wraith focused fiction on this site.I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Will do so once the story is completed. :) And thank you for your kind comments.
The little one
Reviewer: Cyprian Gadigan (Signed)
28 Jul 2011 12:03 pm
How sad. Poor Gwen and Michael. I always thought Mike got the shit of the stick, but then he turned out to be such a good Bad Guy for the show. Now its sadder.

Author's Response: I didn't want to deviate from the episode just make missing scenes so to speak. But there will be more of Michael and Gwen in the sequel with a few surprises...I'll let you know when it's posted. :) And yes I think poor Michael got a pretty raw deal too, what the team did crossed a line but I don't think they expected it to work so well and were far to optimistic that he could be integrated into humanity.
Everything
Reviewer: Cyprian Gadigan (Signed)
20 Jul 2011 3:25 pm
I like the idea, but what happened to the rest?

Author's Response: Four more chapters are are waiting to be posted. ;) And I'm currently working on a sequel set during the episode of The Prodigal, flashbacks to relevant episodes in between that and the episode of Michael also with a look beyond after the show's finale. This second book is tentatively called Something and so far five chapters I've worked out. But won't be uploading the Something chapters till the last four chapters of Everything are posted. Also with the book of Something I think it might be longer than Everything and may spill into a third book...stressing the word may.
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