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Reviewer: Laryn (Anonymous)
15 Jul 2006 2:45 am
I like the story, and very much enjoy what I'm reading. But if I were to suggest an improvement, it would be to combine your chapters a bit more often. You could easily separate them with a line or symbol combination and the format you've already got in place, and it wouldn't interrupt your story as often as clicking to new pages does. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Origionally, it was the POV that was supposed to be changing each time. But that's sort of broken down to nothing now, so, yeah, I see what you mean. thanks.
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Reviewer: orion (Signed)
16 Jun 2006 1:08 pm
i'm totally for Sharing in this case. and if you ever need help for french ask me, i'm french and i'd gladly help you. do you speak english translate in Parlez-vous francais? since mckay is canadian he can't make errors. well now i still got 10 chapters to read. but it's good, really good.

Author's Response: I could really use the help. I am an American English speaker, and do not even spell well in it, either, so I rely on spell checkers heavily. I do speak a little here and there of a number of other languadges, but SPEAK is the key word. Thanks for the offer, I may well take it up later on. Thanks for the comments!
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Reviewer: Krysalys (Signed)
04 Jun 2006 3:27 am
Heh. She should show her smarts and take them BOTH on. Heh. Share and share alike, I always say, *BEG* ----}-@

Author's Response: You have read my mind! I was planning on getting her to go from one to the other, but now you've changed that. Darn. Gotta go rewrite about five chapters before they get posted...
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Reviewer: AWall (Anonymous)
01 Jun 2006 7:34 pm
I enjoyed this chapter, I am looking forward to more. This pairing is one of my favorites. I hope you do not mind if I mention a typo, leek instead of leak. It created a strange mental image.

Author's Response: Sorry about the strange mental image. I'm not the best of spellers and had to use a spell checker. Guess I wasn't looking at what was being corrected. Thanks for the review. More's comming in just a minute!
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