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Reviewer: Formaldehyde (Signed)
02 Mar 2010 5:44 pm
I was just thinking that someone should write something like this. Absolutely excellent job. I especially liked Rodney's whole 'I'm leaving the second Sheppard to die' complex, it seems like something he'd do. And Sheppard's fake/real thoughts were very touching for me. All in all, fantastic job. Thank you so much.
Reviewer: lena (Anonymous)
12 Feb 2007 9:16 pm
"It wasn't the first time John had done his best to not be real." Now that was a powerful line. Really.

Author's Response: ^^ Thank you!
Fear Mongering
Reviewer: zaftig (Signed)
28 Dec 2006 4:06 am
Well, I would have to agree that I was a little dissatisfied with part 3, but I wanted to say that I really liked parts 1 and 2. Liked John being down there instead of Sam, and then very much liked that it was real and that John actually went through the experience with Rodney.

Author's Response: Thanks! I know the third part isn't very popular with everyone who liked the first two, but I'm glad you liked the story regardless. So again-- thanks!
The Sum Of
Reviewer: Magent13 (Anonymous)
20 Dec 2006 8:07 am
"Just a little more screwy than usual. Fit for missions." OMG! LOL...thats too funny. But I was waiting for them to get together in the end...what happen?

Author's Response: It's a frustrating open-ending! I know, I know. But that's how it had to be~
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Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
18 Dec 2006 2:57 am
Chapter one I was like WOW, someone finally did this idea. It was great and I loved it. Chapter two was good and unexpected, but kind of sad yet it was a cliffhanger so it was okay. Sadly chapter 3 is so disjointed I have no idea what you were trying to convey and feel short changed. You had such a good idea going w/ chapters one and two. Perhaps a rewrite for three or some clarity. Did Rodney and John get together or what?

Author's Response: I figured a lot of people would dislike it, but chapter 3 is actually like that on purpose-- I want things to be left a little unclear and confusing. John and Rodney are kind of messed up-- anything easier there would feel like a cop-out to me. ...About half the people who read this didn't like that last part, but I knew that would probably be the case going in.
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Reviewer: haggy (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2006 8:47 am
this was a great take on the episode. bravo!!

Author's Response: Thank you!