Reviews For Focus
Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
14 Dec 2006 4:00 pm
That sound like quite the challenge to me!! I hope there is a continuation.
Reviewer: Tria (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2006 5:56 pm
I liked this a lot. Loved Teyla being so strong - love the idea of a woman dominating in sex. Loved the idea of John and Teyla "torturing" Rodney. And, of course, loved Rodney's smugness! Thanks.
Very hot and a lot of fun. I wonder what Rodney's 'payback' will be? I liked this side of Teyla too, a little awkward, a little less confident in a situation she's not encountered before. I'd guess that those feelings are done with now though, now that she's been assured of her welcome :). Laura.