Very cool. but paragraph four line one has 7 words.
Author's Response: Wow, you're right! I have no idea how that slipped through. It's corrected now, and thank you so much for letting me know!
Reviews For (this story's just) Six Words Long
Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Anonymous)
14 Dec 2006 8:40 pm
Flying tackle! How cute is that! What a great idea you had--I'll bet this was hard to do, but I sure loved it. Great story!
Reviewer: mercury973 (Anonymous)
13 Dec 2006 5:09 pm
Clever idea and sweet. Good job.