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Reviewer: vain_firechild (Signed)
26 May 2007 5:52 am
It's wonderfully well written. But I just don't get it. I'm sure that I'm missing something obvious but I don't get it.

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you liked the writing? I'm not sure what you don't get - there are five fairly self-contained segments from Sheppard's life as I imagine it, and the only thing in common is a very specific regret. It was part of a meme series that went around livejournal a few months back, where you'd ask for prompts and people on your list of friends would say, for example, "5 shots Sheppard wishes he'd taken" and you had to write a story in this format. I wrote several. There's not meant to be a discrete internal plot or anything, so you're probably not actually missing anything. There's not a lot to get, is all. *g*
Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
09 May 2007 2:15 am
Oh wow, very powerful. I love that he mourns the loss of his age.

Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
15 Dec 2006 5:59 am
I like that not all of the "shots" were bullets. That caught me offguard.

Author's Response: I wasn't too sure what to do with this prompt, so I'm glad the way I went made sense to someone else. Thanks!