Reviews For Rhythm
Reviewer: dolarabee (Anonymous)
27 Dec 2006 11:56 pm
I liked the pace. Like how you took us from a younger Ronon all the way to his final days as a runner in so many words.
I hope you don't mind but I rec'd it on satedan_fire (and LJ comm).
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Reviewer: Manic (Anonymous)
27 Dec 2006 10:05 pm
I like how Ronan first thinks of them as funny :)
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Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Anonymous)
26 Dec 2006 12:38 pm
That was just lovely. I love the pacing device of the drum beat. And you show the action very well. Authentic dialogue, too. Well done story!
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