That was very powerful. You really got the emotions in there! Excellent job with the dialogue and thought processes; you stayed faithful to canon John. Super job--dark, but I liked it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comments. I'm glad that you liked it, even with the darkness. Thank you, too, for noticing the dialogue; I try to make it as realistic as possible.
Reviews For Christmas Ghosts
Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Anonymous)
28 Dec 2006 9:17 pm
One of One