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Reviews For The Dream Series

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Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
01 Jan 2007 4:38 am
LOL okay that was cute. I did feel a tad bad that it wasn't John in the dream between Carson and Rodney. I think they need to make it up to him. Thanks for sharing. :>)

Author's Response: Don't worry. In the next one I'm writing, John is on the receiving end. Glad you thought it was cute. Thanks for the review.
John's Dream/Finale
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
30 Dec 2006 4:58 pm
I grinned at the finale :). I'd wondered why John's dream was so different to Carson and Rodney's. Their two dreams were hot. The one thing I would say is that it was sometimes a bit confusing pov-wise. By which I mean that Rodney's dream should have just been from Rodney's pov, he wouldn't know what Carson was thinking, even if it was his dream. ame for Carson's dream having Rodney's pov in it. I just think that it makes it read more like a general story and not a dream sequence, if you see what I mean? It's not something that spoils the fic, but it might improve it a bit. Laura.

Author's Response: Yes, I see what you mean. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll try and change it and I'll definately remember that for next time. Glad you liked the ending! :)
John's Dream/Finale
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