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Reviewer: XanDutch (Anonymous)
31 Dec 2006 1:56 pm
Lovely delicious story, with a wonderful mix of angst and romance. I enjoyed it, and I wouldn't mind seeing some more. For example someone else (Radek, Teyla, Ronon?) cornering preferably Rod about the distance between Rodney and Sheppard lately, and the apparent wig he is driving between them. As for setting him up: do you think Carter would like him? *G* One other thing though: I think you meant centimeters, not meters. Kissing would be difficult standing on opposite sides of the room...

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you. I'm considering a sequal, not sure yet though. And yes I meant centimeters not meters! **face palm** That would be kind of difficult to kiss from wouldn't it? ;) Thanks for pointing that out.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
31 Dec 2006 11:55 am
Great fic. Poor Rodney. It was so sad to see him so sad, and needlessly too :(. I had hoped that he was wrong about John and Rod, and as soon as I heard John confessing his love to Rod, I knew I was right, odd though that sounds. I guessed he had to be practicing. I felt so sad for Rodney's continuing despair and how he assumed he was going to his farewell dinner. I did think he was being a little dense when he aw how John's room was done out. It's a good job John's used to him and his obliviousness! Very hot sex, once Rodney caught on, and I liked the discovery of his kink for John's command voice (I can see his point *g*). Laura.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the fic. Yeah, I was worried that Rodney would come across as dense but then I realized that once Rodney gets something in his head, it takes a sledgehammer to get it out. Mmmmmmm, John's command voice....oh yes, very sexy! ;)
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
30 Dec 2006 11:27 pm
Love it. And commanding!John. mmm....

Author's Response: Thank you! and mmmmm, indeed! ;)
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
30 Dec 2006 10:53 pm
*L* Rodney is so clueless but I'm glad he finally got the hint. :) And very hot too.

Author's Response: Thank you! I love clueless Rodney, he's so adorable. **happy sigh**
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Reviewer: tip (Anonymous)
30 Dec 2006 8:17 pm
a good start! a tip though: check your use of "then" where it should be "than"

Author's Response: **hangs head** I'm horrible with that! Thank you for pointing it out. :) I'm glad you liked the story!

Author's Response: Not sure if you'll check out my responses. But I just realized that for some reason over half of my story didn't post. So if you catch this, go back and read the rest. :)
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