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Reviewer: Maryilee (Anonymous)
03 Oct 2008 4:36 pm
I enjoyed this little slice of Sheppard whumping. It's well-written and the bug dreams were a trip.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :-)
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Reviewer: kittytrypsin (Anonymous)
18 Feb 2007 3:41 pm
A nicely rounded story that started with the best of intentions and through no fault of Shep's ended with him getting hurt. I loved the idea of who/what was attacking them and of course of John's hallucinations. Well done. Kitty

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind comments and review. I really appreciate it! I'm glad that you enjoyed the story and John's hallucinations. I tried to write a serious military story, per the person's challenge, but it ended up a wee bit more humorous than that. Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
03 Jan 2007 12:43 am
Excellent whumpage. Poor John, he really doesn't have much luck, does he? And typical Rodney, so caught up in his bitching that he didn't notice John's discomfort or fever. He made up for it when he unquestioningly headed out to the gate alone, in hostile-native territory, though. I liked the characterisations of everyone, especially John and Rodney's banter. Laura.

Author's Response: As usual, you've provided a wonderful insightful review. I don't deserve reviewers like you, when I make you wait so long in between stories sometimes! Still, I'm not giving you up! I'm so glad that you liked Rodney, since this is really the first story in which I've ever written him extensively, and it was a real challenge for me to try to get his voice right. Thank you so much!
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Reviewer: Lady Anne (Signed)
01 Jan 2007 4:17 pm
Oh, nice!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it. :-)
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