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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
19 Jan 2007 6:23 pm
An intriguing story. It left me feeling quite breathless as it started in the middle, with the Genii and Wraith already well into their attempted invasions and the four command staff already sucked in by Alis. No coincidence that it was the four leaders she'd sucked in for reprogramming, I'm sure. I loved how Ronon took charge and Atlantis helped him out. She obviously decided his actions in defending her were worthy of her reacting to him even without the gene. I too wonder whether she'll help him out with Lorne again *g*. I'm glad John and Rodney got something good out of their endless trials and horrible suffering. I hope they'll be okay soon. Glad to know that Elizabeth woke up, and presumably so did Carson. Laura.

Author's Response: *Grins* thank you. This one was a little difficult to write so I'm happy that it's being received well :)
Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
19 Jan 2007 12:25 am
Interesting idea. Though you seemed to put too much too soon in some area. Also, besides some errors that got over looked, a big one is you have Ronon announcing they got the ZPM from Dagan BEFORE the team returned, which they did several paragraphs later. :>) Nothing a quick edit and small rewrite can't fix. The orginal charactor in the VR was interesting, though it wasn't clear in what way the others were to conform. Also, Ronon/Dex? Interesing situation, but why did Atlantis or ??? do it...sorry, that didn't fit the story line you were creating. Did like how the 2IC's got a chance to run the show, it was neat.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The ZPM thing though, that was on purpose. I'd originally included a line that explained it, but it got lost at some point. :) it was a bit rushed but it was a secret santa project that I had three days to finish and I wanted to leave it the way it was.
Reviewer: Mike (Anonymous)
18 Jan 2007 9:55 pm
Hey, that was a lot of fun! Too bad the second stringers don't get to take charge more often, they're pretty good.

Author's Response: Thanks ^_^
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