Reviews For The Next Few Lines

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Reviewer: Syble (Anonymous)
11 Jun 2008 2:29 am
Just found this wonderful story. I loved how distantly intimate John and Elizabeth were and how close and comfortable John and Rodney were.
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
25 Feb 2007 7:53 am
Wonderful story. Thanks.
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Reviewer: Elisa (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2007 6:28 pm
WOW, loved it!! Really love how John and Rodney gradually got closer until they realized they were going to be together. And then when they finally did, I loved the whole talking, touching, laughing, and loving scene - that was fantastic! Thanks for this gretat story! As always looking forward to your next story!!
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Reviewer: DaVinci's Girl (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2007 5:24 pm
This rings sweet and true. It's beautiful, as is all your work.
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Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2007 6:16 am
This was sweet and sad. I'm glad things worked out between the love birds. :>) Also, I think John and Elizabeth know how it goes as it happened to them. (Though I wasn't sure where in the season this was taking place) Thanks for a good storyl.
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Reviewer: SylvanWitch (Anonymous)
20 Jan 2007 5:47 am
As usual, you've written a thoroughly entertaining, deeply thoughtful, powerful, and deliciously hot story. I love the bittersweetness in this story, and the realistic "break up" is just spot on. Bravo! Excellent work! I can see it happening like this!
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Reviewer: spacemonkette (Signed)
20 Jan 2007 4:39 am
As usual, Chelle. Hot and amazing story. I loved the Liz and John dynamic too, and the way their "relationship" clearly didn't really mean ANYTHING to him...And then when he and Rodney finally got together! UH! Lovely! And just so damn hot!
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