Yay for Lorne getting Koyla. :) This was good.
Author's Response: Thank you very much BC. I'm glad you liked my story :-)
Reviews For The race
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
04 Feb 2007 9:40 pm
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
03 Feb 2007 12:24 am
Oooooh, revenge for John. Good stuff. :)
Author's Response: Hey BC, thank you very much for your FB. More soon.
Author's Response: Hey BC, thank you very much for your FB. More soon.
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
01 Feb 2007 9:54 pm
Interesting. :) Good story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks!
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Reviewer: fanficaddict (Anonymous)
31 Jan 2007 11:12 am
omg poor rodney!!! poor poor rodney! Very well written :) Reading on!
Author's Response: Hey! thank you very much for your feedback, more soon :-)
Author's Response: Hey! thank you very much for your feedback, more soon :-)
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Reviewer: Suzanne (Anonymous)
30 Jan 2007 11:37 pm
Poor John.. not being able to tell Rodney that they are together... sigh..
Great job, can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Hey Suzanne, thank you very much for your feedback :-) More soon.
Author's Response: Hey Suzanne, thank you very much for your feedback :-) More soon.
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Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
30 Jan 2007 8:22 pm
This is so cool. I am enjoying this story immensly. Looking forward to more. Thanks
Author's Response: Hey Duff, thank you very much for your feedback :-)More soon.
Author's Response: Hey Duff, thank you very much for your feedback :-)More soon.
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
30 Jan 2007 7:16 pm
This is great. I wonder how much of Rodney's memory he will get back. There should be a blank space around what happened to him. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your feedback BC :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your feedback BC :-)
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Reviewer: Llanea (Anonymous)
29 Jan 2007 11:19 am
that was incredibly done, like the fact that it wasnt overdone in the relationship department and that the coloner found him like that, great story, really heart renching. can't wait for the next instalment
Author's Response: Hey Llanea, thank you very much for your feedback :-)
Author's Response: Hey Llanea, thank you very much for your feedback :-)
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Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
28 Jan 2007 11:32 pm
Very disturbing. Looking for more, soon.
Author's Response: hey Duff, will post part 2 today. Thank you for the FB :-)
Author's Response: hey Duff, will post part 2 today. Thank you for the FB :-)
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Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
28 Jan 2007 9:45 pm
Whoa. Koyla is a dead man when John gets his hands on him. Keep it coming. Good story. :)
Author's Response: Hey BC. I'm going to post part 2 soon. Thank you for the FB :-)
Author's Response: Hey BC. I'm going to post part 2 soon. Thank you for the FB :-)
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Reviewer: Suzanne (Anonymous)
28 Jan 2007 12:03 pm
Kolya must die.. grrrrrrrrrr Poor Rodney and Poor John... This is really a great start..Can't wait to see the next chapter:)
Author's Response: Hey Suzanne. Thank you for the FB. I'm going to post part 2 soon.
Author's Response: Hey Suzanne. Thank you for the FB. I'm going to post part 2 soon.
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Reviewer: Sheppy (Anonymous)
28 Jan 2007 11:37 am
Aww..poor Rodney. Please keep writing I like this story.
Author's Response: Hey Sheppy, I will post part 2 tomorrow Thank you very much for your FB :-)
Author's Response: Hey Sheppy, I will post part 2 tomorrow Thank you very much for your FB :-)
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