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great story so far, can't wait to see more. Are the guys still getting paid? cause I spose they could use their pay to buy stuff on earth, especially if they're not planning to go back soon, what else will they do with it? More Soon Please!!!

Author's Response: They are getting paid. As to what they do with it? No idea. Read and find out!

I like it. However I wish I hadn't come into the story as it was beginning, 'cos now I'm going to go nuts waiting for the next exciting chapter. You're a great writer. Eagerly awaiting next exciting installment.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Interesting concept, and overall very believable that Atlantis could be overlooked & ignored when administration changes. I like seeing the younger O'Neil & Jackson & look forward to seeing how they work out in Atlantis.

Author's Response: The thing is, they are getting ignored both on purpose and by accident. And finding out who is doing it, that is the fun part!

It's good to get a bit more background for this O'Neill and Jackson, as they are likely to be different to the ones I know from SG-1. Not so good to learn of SG-1's missing status :(. I hope Jon doesn't ever feel he has to use his knowledge against John. And that could get confusing: John and Jon, though I understand why Jon would want to distance himself from Jack a bit more by using a different name. Looking forward to more. Laura.

Author's Response: Oh, there will be similarities, there is no choice, they started from the SG1 characters, so they will develope from there. And Jon's name is canon. JAck's first name is Jonathan, so it wasn't that big of a stretch!

Okay, did I somehow miss this chapter last time? I've read the following one, but not this one. Very weird. Anyway, onto the fb. I'm glad to see that everyone had noticed and done what they could by padding requisitions and such. I was also pleased to see Caldwell in their corner, running raids with Siler and Harriman. It sounds like they have enough materials to hold their own in most cases, but it's worrying to find out just how many unsuitable people they've been sent :(. Here's hoping their plans bear fruit. Laura.

Author's Response: The reason you missed this is because this is the first time I have posted to this forum. Sorry! Caldwell strikes me as a guy who has a high degree of honor. And he pays his debts. Atlantis saved him, so he will do what he can to save Atlantis. And the people who are unsuitable? Tend to end up dead. Unfortuanatly. :-(

I'm glad that things aren't bleak enough yet for them not to laugh, but it certainly sounds like it can only get worse before it gets better. Interesting additions of clone-O'Niell and Jackson. I wonder how they will fit in. Laura.

Author's Response: Well O'Neill junior just disapeared from canon, so I had to use him! And what is O'Neill with out Jackson? So, Daniel came too!

Very cool premise. I look forward to seeing how it turns out.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Interesting start. Just what has Rodney got planned for this eventuality? Did any of the others make similar plans? I'm keen to see where this goes. Laura.

Author's Response: Plans have been made, and things are now in motion. As to what will happen? Keep reading.

Interesting premise. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!