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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
09 Feb 2007 2:08 pm
Where? Where did they end up? The chapter is too long and has too many good spots for me to tell you about. Again, I love the military feel of the fic and the characterizations. Q Quote: "I feel like I tried to shit a pineapple," A wonderfully amusing, crude and effective description :)
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
09 Feb 2007 1:30 pm
Yeah! I'm so happy! Another story from you! I had no idea what to expect from the description, but it certainly didn't involve Teyla missing. I look forward to more.
Reviewer: anonymous (Anonymous)
08 Feb 2007 3:02 am
This was just...wow. The story was amazing, well thought out and well-written. I adore your talent for characterization, and this was just beautiful. It was nice, too, how you made references to certain episodes that I think should have had more of an impact, especially on John, and giving it a chance here. I really liked how you used the ATA gene here, your description of how it connects John (and others like Reletti) to Atlantis was great, very believable. Again, all of the military detail that you had was the perfect addition to create further depth in the story through realistic means. Oh, and you have my thanks for including Lorne's team. There are few authors who could pull off writing an OC and that you do it so well for so many of them is just amazing. I love your OCs and I really appreciated their presence in this fic. This was a wonderful read, thank you.
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