Reviews For Tears Unshed

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Reviewer: dolarabee (Signed)
21 Mar 2007 4:52 pm
Very moving. Not sure Teyla would be so detached, or would bury something like the loss of her son, but you certainly made it convincing. Well written. And Ronon is ever so supportive.

Author's Response: Well, the thing with Teyla is that while very emotional, she's also very private, and in this case she didn't believe she had the right to mourn her child. To her mind, any mourning should have happened when she left Nalan, not when he died two years later. I'm glad it works, at least. I'll actually probably be re-writing bits of it (read: adding a few flashbacks) in a short while, but no set ideas when yet. Thanks for reading ^_^ And I think that Ronon would /be/ supportive, in a quiet way, and he /gets/ loss and the inability/lack of opportunity to mourn.
Reviewer: Elspeth (Anonymous)
20 Feb 2007 12:54 am
Beautifully written, wonderful characterizations.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. This piece was really a struggle for me, because I didn't want to run too far to either end of the spectrum, and I desperately wanted to both do the subject justice and stay true to character. I'm glad it read well for someone ^_^