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Reviewer: Atlantis_Angel (Signed)
14 Apr 2011 6:36 am
This is a beautiful story. A really lovely slow progression of Rodney and John's journey from friends to lovers. Incredibly hot too.
Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
24 Jun 2007 10:39 am
Great story! :D I loved the slow burn you built up, that you didn't just jump right to it. Them falling asleep together that first time was absolutely adorable! Also liked the conversation with Ronon that started the whole thing quite alot.

Author's Response: It didn't seem right to have them leap into bed right after the incident-- they needed to build some trust again, and yeah, I like the slow burn, too. *g* The second I heard Rodney confess to downloading porn, I knew I had to write fic about it. And yeah, I can't see Ronon letting a comment like that go. :D I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
23 Feb 2007 7:34 pm
Excellent fic. I was so worried, when John suffered his lapse in judgement, that it couldn't be fixed. I could sympathise with Rodney's outrage and broken trust and it was sad to see him isolating himself so thoroughly. I was in two minds over John's feelings, however. On the one hand, it served him right that Rodney was avoiding him, but on the other, he was *so* miserable and guilt-ridden. I loved his gesture of the journal and that Rodney appreciated it for what it was. It was gtreat to see their friendship gradually getting better again. It was even better to see things progress further. I liked the hesitancy, the fear that John wouldn't like it and they'd lose their hard won friendship. At the same time, I loved the intensity, so I was very happy when Rodney came back into John's room that final time and they went for it. Very hot and so tender and careful, John taking his time exploring and Rodney giving him free reign without any pressure. I'd say things worked out for the best :). Laura.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the fic! When I was writing it, I got a bit stuck right at the point where John had to make a grand gesture. What could possibly make it all okay? A friend suggested the journal. I think it worked very well. *g* I didn't want them to just fall into bed, either, but build things up again. I'm so glad everything I wanted for them came through so clearly! And yeah, I agree. I think things worked out for the best, too. *g*
Reviewer: Mystic (Anonymous)
19 Feb 2007 9:25 pm
I actually just finished reading this on the other site, but had to post here so anyone reading this knows...they MUST read this. it's angsty, sensual and hot and heart warming all in one. A great story that should be read! I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you for the rec! It's a bit of a rollercoaster ride, isn't it? Much more angsty than I usually write. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Haggy (Signed)
19 Feb 2007 4:05 pm
Do you have this posted somewhere else? If so I hope I had the good sense to leave feedback If not and my final few brain cells are playing tricks on me I would like to say.... Fantastic storry!! loved the break in trust and the cautious return to what they once had. Loved the sweet way Rodney allowed John to explore his body...Just a terrific story :)

Author's Response: I just posted it today, so you probably haven't had a chance to read it anywhere else. *g* I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It's a bit of an emotional rollercoaster ride, so I'm glad you stuck it out with me. Thanks for letting me know you liked it!
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