Reviews For Unfolding Right Before My Eyes
Lovely story. I can see how John just wasn't interested in cuddling after his mother died, how it was something special between the two of them that no one else was trusted enough to do. I loved that Rodney would be the one to reaquaint John with the joys of cuddling, completely unaware that he might be crossing boundaries and so, unintentionally (probably) allowing John to get used to the touches for the very reason that Rodney didn't really expect anything when he did it. Very nice. Laura.
Reviewer: Merlin's Sister (Anonymous)
03 Mar 2007 9:20 am
Very John. Nice work.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 5:24 pm
That was adorable! Nice work.
Reviewer: BC (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 4:59 pm
That was really sweet and great. Thanks for sharing. :)
Very sweet story. I like the logical progression from blanket forts to John cuddling up with his mother while sick, to cuddling with girlfriends, lovers, then Rodney - who is eminently cuddle-able. I think I vaguely recall the Homer Price books - something about watching a donut-making machine through a plate glass window?
Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 10:25 am
I can so see that Rodney would be an aggressive cuddler. Perfect. Thanks
Reviewer: CatMoran (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 7:46 am
Aww! I love this line: Rodney in bed was pretty much an attack cuddler
Reviewer: BLV (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 6:11 am
That's a sweet story. Very enjoyable! Thanks for sharing.