Beautifully written insight on Rodney's behalf. Great he finally has someone to help him through the pain (in more than one sense).
Author's Response: Yeah. Though I should probably write the aftermath of this. :)
Reviews For Focal Point
Reviewer: Twinchy (Signed)
28 Jun 2007 11:39 pm
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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
22 Jun 2007 3:06 pm
Loved this one too! ^^ Especialliy the hand-holding and that last bit with the kiss on the forehead and Rodney's parting thoughts ...
Author's Response: Let's just hope he remembers them when he's lucid again. ;)
Author's Response: Let's just hope he remembers them when he's lucid again. ;)
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Mar 2007 5:38 am
Poor Rodney, all broken and hurting :(. I loved his introspection, how he used his thoughts about the mystery of John to distract himself from the pain and how he gradually started to realise that John only touched him and that Rodney quite liked that. Hopefully he'll remember that when he's better and can do something about it ;). Laura.
Author's Response: I'm sure he will. :)
Author's Response: I'm sure he will. :)
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Reviewer: GBaby (Signed)
03 Mar 2007 9:58 am
Oh, that was very nice! Poor Rodney, but of how much I love him whumped and cared for! I liked this very much :)
Yours GB
Author's Response: Don't we all? *laughs* Thank you for commenting!
Author's Response: Don't we all? *laughs* Thank you for commenting!
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Reviewer: Tria (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 9:09 am
I love your writing. It is always powerful and beautiful. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you! *beams*
Author's Response: Thank you! *beams*
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Reviewer: duff (Anonymous)
02 Mar 2007 8:19 am
How sweet was that! Lovely. Thanks
Author's Response: Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you!
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