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Reviewer: girlgonemadd (Signed)
12 Mar 2007 1:00 am
This was great and I loved the line, 'He blew out a breath and seriously considered shooting himself in the head.' It was just so much like John to think of something like that, it made me laugh.

Author's Response: :-) I'm pleased that worked for you, I love writing John. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to leave fb, I appreciate it.xx.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 Mar 2007 6:42 pm
Lovely. It was so easy to see that Rodney would wall himself away again, not allow the chance for anything else to hurt him, all the time locked in his guilty feelings. I'm glad John was able to get through those walls, in his own awkward way. It made it more real that he had such trouble saying what he felt...not that he did actually *say* it. But Rodney got it and that was all that mattered. Very hot and tender. Laura.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you. That's wonderful feedback. I always worry about Rodney and the list of lives he must carry around with him, he was never trained for anything like this. Thank heaven for John, eh?! Thank you again.xx.
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Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
04 Mar 2007 12:45 pm
Very hot. And so Rodney. The insecurity is heartbreaking... thanks for a happy ending....

Author's Response: Thank you for the fb. I apprecite it and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. .xx.
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Reviewer: Lishel Fracrium (Signed)
04 Mar 2007 11:40 am
that was hot,sweet,and beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you very much, glad you liked it.xx.
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Reviewer: sandy (Anonymous)
04 Mar 2007 9:43 am
Wow, that was hot! So how it could have been. thanks

Author's Response: Yeah, I like to think John helped Rodney out ;-) Thanks for the fb.xx.
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Reviewer: Suki Blue (Anonymous)
04 Mar 2007 8:58 am
Lovely stuff!

Author's Response: Thank you! .xx.
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