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Reviewer: Soledad (Anonymous)
18 Mar 2007 3:10 pm
An excellent beginning. I hope you'll have the patience for a slow pace, so that little details may be worked out, hints may be placed, character development may take place. I also hope this will be a very long story. If you keep up this level of good writing, I'll certainly follow it to the end. :)

Author's Response: Well, I've got some more to post soon. I'm just glad someone took an interest in it!
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