An excellent beginning. I hope you'll have the patience for a slow pace, so that little details may be worked out, hints may be placed, character development may take place. I also hope this will be a very long story. If you keep up this level of good writing, I'll certainly follow it to the end. :)
Author's Response: Well, I've got some more to post soon. I'm just glad someone took an interest in it!
Reviews For The Dark Side of the Mirror
Reviewer: Soledad (Anonymous)
18 Mar 2007 11:10 am