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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 6:24 pm
Nice ending. I'm glad John took the time to assimilate the overwhelming feelings and to talk with Elizabeth about them, but that he was ultimately fine and able to go on his mission. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks again Laura, glad you liked it. :)
New Beginnings
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 6:13 pm
I guess it will take John awhile to deal with Shan'ra's emotions and come out of his shock, but it was still dismaying to see him so unresponsive. Laura.

Author's Response: That's what I was going for, it was to convey how stronly the Ancient's felt about the war with the Wraith.
Endings
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 6:08 pm
I liked the technical aspects, the way Shan'ra was able to connect to the jumpers and drones so much more deeply than John can. I also liked the emotional tones and how that linked in with he and Elizabeth's earlier conversation about how men and women feel things. Laura.

Author's Response: Yea, I thought I had gone a little too far emotionally but everyone who has read it says that it's alright.
Cy'tok
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 6:01 pm
Well, John certainly seemed fine, so let's hope everyone's worrying for nothing. Laura.
Insight
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 5:51 pm
Well, I'm glad John seems unharmed by his experience. But *seems* is the operative word there. Is he truly fine, other than the Ancient he spoke when he first woke? What will further exposure to the memory device do to him? Can't wait to see. Laura.

Author's Response: Ah, I don't want to give anything away. Keep reading! Thanks for your time taken to read my story. :)
Awakening
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 5:44 pm
Poor John; that would be very confusing, being two people at once and not quite sure which was real, especially as he was caught in a wraith attack. I hope Rodney or Carson finds something, or that Elizabeth's words help anchor John somehow. Laura.
Memories
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 5:36 pm
Very intriguing start. What's so special about these artefacts that John can 'hear' them? What's it done to John and will they be able to fix him? Can't wait to see more. Laura.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review Laura, I'm suggesting that the Ancient developed more on their neural interface technology through use of the gene. Since John has the gene naturally (and it's pretty strong) he can access it. Think of it as more 'modern' Ancient technology. To find out more, read the rest, all will become clear. Yours, Admiral.
Artefacts
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