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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
25 Mar 2007 2:37 pm
Oh, very hot. It's *almost* enough for me to suggest John eats an orange every day, but the risk of a slip up is just a bit too easy. I loved being in John's head for this as he drowned in the pleasure, even as he hated how easily he gave everything to Rodney. Also adding to the hotness was Rodney's quiet control and how he got off on John's response to him. Laura.

Author's Response: Yeah, that scene just... begged for something. Thanks, babe.
Reviewer: Risha (Anonymous)
23 Mar 2007 12:39 pm
Mmmmm, hot.

FYI, you lost part of a sentence ("his skin still tingling from ").

Author's Response: *facepalm* Oh, man. I hate html. Fixed now, and thanks for the heads up.

Reviewer: Lady Taevyn (Anonymous)
23 Mar 2007 7:46 am
Wow. This really opens with a bang, and keeps on going. This is one of the Hottest PWP's I've read in a long time. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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