Reviews For Making Amends

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
29 Mar 2007 10:22 pm
Great story. I liked this different side to John, his unease at being watched and the revelation that he's so shy that it takes time for him to work up to sex with the lights on. Such a contrast to the flirting we see and the assumptions that leads people to make- as Rodney proved. I felt bad for John so obviously struggling, yet knowing he had no choice if he wanted to get Ronon home in time, so it was great to see Rodney helping and being so understanding and careful in that help. Of course John would avoid him after that, so I'm glad Rodney didn't let him get away with it (and remembered to turn the lights off). Laura.

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. What a lovely long comment. I had it in my head that it's people seeing his face in intimate situations that is the problem - normal social stuff he's fine with. The struggling bit was the original idea for the story, so I'm pleased you picked up on that, and I'm glad you see it as Rodney turning off the lights. I left it ambiguous, I suppose, but in my head it is Rodney that does it.
Reviewer: luvsciencegeeks (Signed)
29 Mar 2007 3:46 am
Very nice! I enjoyed the story, and I liked the way you presented it (present, flashback). Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you - the flashback thing isn't something I've really done before, I'm glad to hear that worked for you.
Reviewer: katie_kibble (Signed)
28 Mar 2007 6:41 pm
I loved how at first, it was just funny, but then became something serious =)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Llanea (Anonymous)
28 Mar 2007 5:01 pm
yay that was very heart warming though some may see that as non-con may want to put a warning on it

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Crownglass39 (Signed)
28 Mar 2007 12:17 pm
I love that your Rodney is so wonderfully perceptive. This was great!

Author's Response: Thanks - I like Rodney taking care of John a lot.
Reviewer: Lady Taevyn (Anonymous)
28 Mar 2007 4:18 am
Wow, an interesting take on a familiar situation. It was a great fresh look. Good job.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm pleased you found it fresh!
Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
28 Mar 2007 1:53 am
Great story. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Reviewer: Leah (Anonymous)
28 Mar 2007 1:29 am
I really liked that--great slow build, and how it went from funny to frightening to almost tragic and then tender. What could have been a rediculous situation wasn't at all. Very deft.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you - deft is a cool compliment and I'm pleased you found all of that in it.