Wraithbait

Wow. I really and truely liked this! I'm impressed ^_^ Just a little confused why the rating is so high? Are you expecting to write more chapters? I really hope you are as I love the epic quality of this story. I was literalily cringing during mckay's torture, poor bunny T-T I absolutely the dynamic you've created between Carson and Rodney; it seems so authentic and natural. Good show ^_^

you cant end it like that carson and mckay didnt even hook up. are you going to write an other chapter?

Wait a frickin minute. How did they get their weapons back? I thought when Weir, Bates and Beckett were transported inside the dome, their weapons had been mysteriously confiscated. This smells a little hinky to me. Who shot the aliens that were herding our humans down the hall? Ach, questions questions. ----}-@ Krys

...and?! C'mon, you can't leave us like this! Where's the rest? More! MORE!

This is a really great story, i loved how it evolved. I can't wait for the rest of it.

having telekenetic abilities is scary, especially if you can't controll them. I've broken many a pc and other items just by getting in a mood with it :) no1 belvies me but the proof is there i get annoyed or concentrate to hard it goes flying. gr8 take on the feelings of suddenly doing this and on such a scale, i can't move large objects.

Cooooool! They resuced Rodney :D Oooh, it's getting exciting again :D more please!

Wow :D excellent chapter! More please!

Wow! That was a great start on a story. Carson's silent suffering and them all being helpless to save Rodney. At least you gave us some hope at the end. Now I need MORE!

Fantastic beginning! :D very exciting and suspensful! I can't wait to find out what's going on with Rodney :D More please!

ooooooohhhhh, what've they done to rodney???? :( TBC blasted TBC now i have to wait to find out how rodney is, and whats wrong with him :( gr8 starter.