Reviews For Coming Out On Top

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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Anonymous)
19 Mar 2005 1:26 am
Love the ambiguousness, I'd read a bit and think 'this is Rodney's pov', but then the next sentence would have me thinking 'no, it's John thinking this'. It really would work for either of them. Nicely done. Laura.
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Reviewer: Iolanthe (Anonymous)
01 Feb 2005 4:42 am
You had a wonderful story going, great characterization and everything and then you just ended it like you got bored or something! Grrrrrr!
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