Reviews For Secrets

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Reviewer: KenedyDoll (Anonymous)
14 Aug 2009 6:37 pm
Very cutesy , but not the best
Reviewer: spacepirate42 (Signed)
17 Apr 2007 5:57 am
It felt a little rushed throughout. You might have fleshed out the characters a bit more (given reasons behind John and Elizabeth's decision to marry in secret, for example) but I think you have a good general story going here! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'll try to expand the charactors back stories a little more next time. Hopefully my next story will be better.
Reviewer: djaysgirl (Signed)
16 Apr 2007 4:41 pm
Hi there. A good first fic. I feel you could have fleshed it out a little more. events seemed to run very quickly. In places the dialogue semms a little stilted but that will work out with practice. On the whole, I enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanx for the review. My first! I wasn't reallt sure how to write what happened in the time between Elizabeth's fainting and John's return so I kind of left it out. Any suggestions?