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Reviewer: Lee (Anonymous)
14 May 2007 7:12 am
Very cute. Like the story. You managed multiple Rodneys and Sheppards really well without being the least bit confusing. Really good story. :)

Author's Response: thanks! i'm glad you liked it and I really appreciate you taking the time to leave feedback :)
Reviewer: marinav (Signed)
24 Apr 2007 2:51 am
Very cute and witty story, hard to believe it's your first. Good characterizations. I would raise the rating a notch, as there is a brief sex scene. If I were editing, I would cut the last line, as it implies that your readers can't draw their own conclusion. I'll be looking forward to more of your work. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: hi, thanks for commenting, glad you liked it. i wasn't sure about the rating myself, i orignially had it at R but had lowered it, but i do agree with you so i've gone back and changed it. i've got two more fics posted on my LJ but haven't had time to post here just yet! thanks again for taking the time to comment :-)
Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
23 Apr 2007 2:51 am
This was a great first fic. :) John and Rodney get so caught up in things that sometimes they miss the little things.

Author's Response: my thoughts exactly. can't see the wood for the trees and all that! thanks for the comment, i'm really glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
23 Apr 2007 1:07 am
Phew.. my head is spinning.... between John and not-John and Rodney and not-Rodney...... what a merry-go-round. The good news is that I *adore* merry-go-rounds! If that's a first fic, please do more.

Author's Response: thanks! i'm so glad you liked it. i was a bit worried about the 4 of them being too confusing but tried to keep it as simple as possible, although the confusion was actually part of the story too! i have posted a second one to my LJ but not posted it here yet...
Reviewer: Miso no Tsuki (Signed)
22 Apr 2007 10:11 pm
Nice piece, bloody good try for a first fic.They are a pair of idiots, aren't they? *g*

Author's Response: absolutely! i just can't help but think of men that way ;0) thanks very much for the kind comment.
Reviewer: mrsdrmckay (Signed)
22 Apr 2007 2:03 pm
This is cute. I like the way you've portrayed John and his feelings. And, obviously, Rodney tending to panic and jump to the wrong conclusion is spot on.

Author's Response: thanks so much for the comment, i don't know why i'm so fond of angsty john, but stories with him being all soppy are always my favorites! :-)