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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
04 May 2007 6:02 am
This was fun :). Poor John, certain that *something* was wrong, but unable to figure it out...until he did and then he couldn't stop staring inappropriately *g*. I'm liked how Rodney kept teasing John and then finally made his move. I also liked that he saved the sarcsatic comments on John's skill until after they'd finished the hot sex :).

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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
29 Apr 2007 5:47 pm
*L* John is so cute when he is trying to be coy and not succeeding. :) Course Rodney's not much help but that made the sex at the end better.
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Reviewer: rasah (Signed)
29 Apr 2007 11:53 am
ahh, that was really sweet, and kind of hot too! thanks for sharing :)
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Reviewer: IDMike (Signed)
29 Apr 2007 11:13 am
I hafta say, i miss the nipples on Atlantis! But it never occurred to me to write a story about them. Well done!
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
29 Apr 2007 10:14 am
Great story. Thanks.
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