ohh I liked this.....so much potential, I wonder where it is will go. More please!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It being my first story there maybe more in the future need to ponder where to take it.
Reviews For Invisible
Reviewer: Sentarla (Anonymous)
05 May 2007 7:39 pm
Chapter 1 Heading Into Trouble Again
Reviewer: Laurie (Anonymous)
05 May 2007 4:04 pm
This story is begging for a sequel.
Author's Response: Thanks am thinking on that one. Gathering my thoughts and ideas one is slowly in the works.
Author's Response: Thanks am thinking on that one. Gathering my thoughts and ideas one is slowly in the works.
Chapter 1 Heading Into Trouble Again
