Reviews For No One Comes Close

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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
12 May 2007 1:56 pm
I had to read this again. It is even better the second time. :-) Nicely done!
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
07 May 2007 4:47 am
I realy enjoyed this story, but I was so hoping to read how things went afterwards and what more there could be. You drew me in and I can't help but wish for more. Thanks for sharing this part and again...more please?
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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
06 May 2007 3:16 am
That was wrenching and it won't be easy but as long as Rodney goes back to John. I like to think they can work it out. :)
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
06 May 2007 12:03 am
A powerful story. Poor John, there's only so much he can take and it sounds like he's been pushed beyond that and for seemingly quite petty reasons.

I loved Rodney's arrival and refusal to take John's various hints to leave, until he started getting some of the old John to come back. I felt bad for Rodney getting caught up in things, especially as he has no clue why things are happening to John. I understood why he left after his fright, but I'm also glad that it shocked John into speaking to someone and, also, that Rodney had no intention of actually *leaving* and was just waiting for the situation to calm a little.

It all makes me hate the nebulous *Them* that have done this :(.

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Reviewer: Caroline (Anonymous)
05 May 2007 5:11 pm
I love the ending! Very, very great writing, too. :)

(and I just wanted to add that it's "Je ne veux rien acheter!" instead of "Je ne veux pas acheter rien!")
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Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
05 May 2007 3:49 pm
Poor John... life is so unkind to him. Thank god Rodney understands and hangs in. Lovely piece.
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