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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
21 May 2007 9:05 pm
Great John voice as he went through all those flashbacks and then as he dealt with Rodney. I also liked the flashbacks for the light they shed on John's character and the running theme of him 'kinda liking' places simply because it was easier than being somewhere else.

I was relieved that Rodney managed to get through the barriers an get John out of the cold, solitary balcony and out of his brooding thoughts. I liked that John finally caught on to the fact that Rodney really doesn't invite that many people in- to his quarters or his life- and was able to appreciate that he was one of the few.

The awkwardness of the sex, the stop-start nature of it as they miscommunicated, made things that bit hotter and more real when it finally went right and John realised that he really did like it there with Rodney.

Laura.

Author's Response: I'm glad all those things worked for you, particularly the flashbacks. You got all the important things I was trying to convey. Thanks for commenting.
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Reviewer: spacemonkette (Signed)
13 May 2007 8:31 am
This is a very well written story, and the end practically made my brain ooze out of my ears...but seriously you captured John in a really perfect way. And the way Rodney was trying to be the voice of reason at the end was lovely. A very good story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy my take on John worked so well for you. :-)
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Reviewer: Nyx (Anonymous)
10 May 2007 5:09 pm
Beau-ti-ful. *Love* it! Thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks! :-)
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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
10 May 2007 4:16 pm
Yeah, John's place is with Rodney and vice-versa.
Good story.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it!
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