Very cool story. Wow.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad that you liked it.
Reviews For Chronology
Reviewer: (Anonymous)
27 May 2007 8:35 am
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Reviewer: Ayano (Anonymous)
18 May 2007 9:48 pm
This is so... pretty. And so well written. Your sentence structure is thick and sturdy (wierd adjectives, I know, but it made the whole thing stick out for me).
You use so many perfect words in this, and your descriptions are fantastic. Almost poetic in a lot of good ways.
Fantastic work!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your comments. "Thick and sturdy" are perfectly acceptable adjectives, especially when you go on to use the words "almost poetic," too--really, I'm flattered that you liked it so much. Thank you!
You use so many perfect words in this, and your descriptions are fantastic. Almost poetic in a lot of good ways.
Fantastic work!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your comments. "Thick and sturdy" are perfectly acceptable adjectives, especially when you go on to use the words "almost poetic," too--really, I'm flattered that you liked it so much. Thank you!
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