Reviews For Unlikely Target

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Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2007 1:32 am
Fantastic. I really like that last paragraph. Perfect :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I was struggling to work out how to end it. It didn't feel right to me to have SG1 rescue him from his emotional pain, so I shifted it to Atlantis. Besides, I wanted to explain the Kolya incident and how it related to this story... Anyway, glad you liked it.
Chapter Four - Addendum
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2007 1:31 am
Hehehe nice twist - nantites and betrayal. Now how is Rodney going to recover....I'm really liking how you are writing all the characters.

Author's Response: Yeah, my devious little plot bunnies were at work here! Glad you like the way I write the characters, thank you.
Chapter Three Not Safe
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2007 1:25 am
Tsk tsk Rodney. Let them help. *sniff sniff* Such lovely emotions here Rodney resigned, broken and refusing help. SG1 to the rescue?

Author's Response: Ah, but he's so mixed up and hurting and he doesn't want to let them in... Glad you enjoyed the emotional side of things. More to come...
Chapter Two Capture and Escape
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
04 Jun 2007 1:20 am
No no no Rodney. *wants to hug him but his back is a painful mess* Oooh not a nice start. No one knows he's gone and Anubis is exacting his displeasure. Someone save him. *hints to Leesa*

Author's Response: Nasty, nasty Leesa!! Poor little Rodders...! Yes, I know I'm a meanie, but I love him really!! And would I leave him there forever... Glad you're liking it so far.
Chapter One Consolation Prize
Reviewer: Yummy Wraith Bait (Anonymous)
02 Jun 2007 2:26 pm
You know Anubis has a sarcophagus, so why would he worry about killing McKay? This might explain his claustrophobia...

Author's Response: You know, I forgot about that (but then I'm much more Atlantis orientated, so I guess mistakes on the SG1 side are inevitable).rnrnOh well, hopefully it didn't stop you enjoying the story - wish I had thought of it though, it would explain the clausrophobia quite nicely - maybe another fic... hmm...rnrnThanks for the review.
Chapter One Consolation Prize