Fantastic. I really like that last paragraph. Perfect :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I was struggling to work out how to end it. It didn't feel right to me to have SG1 rescue him from his emotional pain, so I shifted it to Atlantis. Besides, I wanted to explain the Kolya incident and how it related to this story... Anyway, glad you liked it.
Reviews For Unlikely Target
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
03 Jun 2007 8:32 pm
Chapter Four - Addendum
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
03 Jun 2007 8:31 pm
Hehehe nice twist - nantites and betrayal. Now how is Rodney going to recover....I'm really liking how you are writing all the characters.
Author's Response: Yeah, my devious little plot bunnies were at work here! Glad you like the way I write the characters, thank you.
Author's Response: Yeah, my devious little plot bunnies were at work here! Glad you like the way I write the characters, thank you.
Chapter Three – Not Safe
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
03 Jun 2007 8:25 pm
Tsk tsk Rodney. Let them help. *sniff sniff* Such lovely emotions here Rodney resigned, broken and refusing help. SG1 to the rescue?
Author's Response: Ah, but he's so mixed up and hurting and he doesn't want to let them in... Glad you enjoyed the emotional side of things. More to come...
Author's Response: Ah, but he's so mixed up and hurting and he doesn't want to let them in... Glad you enjoyed the emotional side of things. More to come...
Chapter Two – Capture and Escape
Reviewer: angw (Anonymous)
03 Jun 2007 8:20 pm
No no no Rodney. *wants to hug him but his back is a painful mess* Oooh not a nice start. No one knows he's gone and Anubis is exacting his displeasure. Someone save him. *hints to Leesa*
Author's Response: Nasty, nasty Leesa!! Poor little Rodders...! Yes, I know I'm a meanie, but I love him really!! And would I leave him there forever... Glad you're liking it so far.
Author's Response: Nasty, nasty Leesa!! Poor little Rodders...! Yes, I know I'm a meanie, but I love him really!! And would I leave him there forever... Glad you're liking it so far.
Chapter One – Consolation Prize
Reviewer: Yummy Wraith Bait (Anonymous)
02 Jun 2007 9:26 am
You know Anubis has a sarcophagus, so why would he worry about killing McKay? This might explain his claustrophobia...
Author's Response: You know, I forgot about that (but then I'm much more Atlantis orientated, so I guess mistakes on the SG1 side are inevitable).rnrnOh well, hopefully it didn't stop you enjoying the story - wish I had thought of it though, it would explain the clausrophobia quite nicely - maybe another fic... hmm...rnrnThanks for the review.
Author's Response: You know, I forgot about that (but then I'm much more Atlantis orientated, so I guess mistakes on the SG1 side are inevitable).rnrnOh well, hopefully it didn't stop you enjoying the story - wish I had thought of it though, it would explain the clausrophobia quite nicely - maybe another fic... hmm...rnrnThanks for the review.
Chapter One – Consolation Prize