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Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
04 Jun 2007 3:36 pm
Oh, wow. You weren't kidding about the angst. That's just depressing. And, very, very true some times. Thanks for sharing.

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Reviewer: Dorothy Marley (Signed)
04 Jun 2007 2:03 pm
I'm not sure what to say, except that reading this was like a punch in the gut--in the good "okay, that was unexpected and at the same time where the story was always going" kind of way. It's a very realistic take on the looming terrors of parenthood, and I think you did a great job imagining how both Rodney and Elizabeth would feel about it.

I especially liked the Rodney-centric narrative, where he mostly sees the approaching parenthood in terms of himself. Also, nice touch with his idea of saying "something comforting" being to offer food. This is a nice, solid piece of introspection, and thanks for posting it.

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