Reviews For Flowers and Cards

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Reviewer: enodemon (Anonymous)
09 Jun 2007 11:08 am
It's really good and powerful, just one small would be better if you chaned 'His secret daughter can't help but smile.' to 'She can't help but smile.' I think the reader understands who she is at the same moment he does and so that last line feels me anyway.
Well done, though!

Author's Response: And I have changed the last line! Thank so much for the help!
Flowers and Cards