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Reviewer: Twinfetish (Signed)
01 Jul 2009 4:23 am
I like that you adressed John's guilt in waking the Wraith up. I've always thought he should break down, or something because of it. I know that he is a very strong person and hides everything, but it was nice to finally see him let go. Even if it was because of the booze.

Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you! This story began out of the simple idea of wanting to write a drunk!John scene that was meant to be entirely humorous--but then the characters went and got more serious on me! I appreciate the FB here a lot. :-)
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Reviewer: iadorespike (Signed)
15 Jul 2007 5:58 pm
He was almost undone by the way Rodney closed his eyes at the contact and tilted his head into John's touch.

Ooohhh, lovely. *sigh*

Rodney flicked a glance at his laptop before looking back at John, his blue eyes blazing like beacons on the shoreline. This way—this way home. He licked his lips unconsciously and the action resonated with a little shiver in the lower portion of John's spine as he watched.

Beacons! Oh my...yes. *beams* Thank-you so much for writing such lovely, long McShep. *hugs*

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!
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Reviewer: Xandutch (Anonymous)
24 Jun 2007 2:03 pm
Very nice. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I had been wanting to write a light-hearted scene in which John was drunk, but somehow the characters wanted to be a little more serious than what I had in mind. Go figure!
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Reviewer: Xandutch (Anonymous)
24 Jun 2007 12:10 pm
I don't think I even need to read this; the summary was enough to induce a fit of loud laughter!

Author's Response: I was my beta Eclipse who came up with the summary--I cheerfully stole it--it said it all!
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