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Reviewer: Kris (Anonymous)
17 May 2008 12:42 pm
This was pretty good. Could have used a bit more Shep-Whomping :-)

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Kris. I'm really honoured you liked it and thought it worked for you, especially since it's been my very first try at fanfiction.rnConcerning the whump, I thought I'd better dial it back a little after carrying it as far as I actually did with this one. The poor guy needed some respite. Yet I'll be happy to provide more (whump story-wise)- and already have an outline roughly made up. I just lack the time to write at the moment.
Reviewer: Julie ( (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2007 7:18 pm
A healer.. you're clever!

GAH! KOLYA! As far as villians go, he's just purely evil. He's so calculated and emotionless as he goes from task to evil task. I love him. He's my second favorite vindictive villian after Shep's skin.

On to more!

Author's Response: Yes, I agree, Kolya is absolutely fabulous as Shep's adversary (my fav villain on the show)! That's also the reason for my putting him in this fic; I felt there was at least one important meeting missing inbetween 'Common Ground' and 'Irresponsible'. Thank you for your wonderful reviews, they made my week!
Reviewer: Julie ( (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2007 7:08 pm
OHMYGOD.. You .. You killed him???

*stares vacantly at computer*.. Seriously???? *squeeks*

Of all the Shep-whump.. that's the first time I've read someone kill him. I must say.. you're brilliant.

Off to more!

Author's Response: So sorry, I shocked you... *hangs head in shame* ...and thanks for the flowers!
Taking all There is
Reviewer: Julie ( (Anonymous)
01 Jul 2007 6:58 pm
Great start! I love fics with off-world action- I wish Elizbeth had been included, only because she and Sheppard, I love when their relationship is expanded more in fics, even if it's not romantically. Their friendship is palpable in every season.

Anyroad, great beginning.. and of course, SHEP WHUMP is the best. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you very much; glad, you liked the start. *blushes*rnrnI would have loved to include more of Weir too but I can't write her very well, so decided against it on the grand scale. But don't despair, she'll have an appearance at the end of the story.
A Welcome of a Kind