Reviews For Awakening

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Reviewer: Atlantia (Anonymous)
02 Jul 2007 7:35 pm
Wow, the idea was so new and inspiring! I admit I thought Ronon and Carson kinda had a moment, but I like how it ended up!

Author's Response: Well, I left that open-ended for possibilities of a sequel, but I haven't decided.
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Reviewer: Hasver (Signed)
02 Jul 2007 7:19 pm
Please have a beta go over your story with you; the way you've written Zelanka's speach is awful. You have given him a mutilated German accent and even if he was it's way to heavy.

Author's Response: I appreciate the concern, but I dont have a beta. As for the speech, I tried my best and I write for the fun of sharing ideas. Sorry I upset you.
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Reviewer: Leishan (Anonymous)
02 Jul 2007 4:49 am
Ooh! Talk about a new look at something! I think its cool how Carson is an Ancient, but I really liked how Ronon was chosen to be the protector. I actually think that makes sense! Keep writing girl!

Author's Response: I appreciate that! I try to be original in my writing and keep the ideas fresh. Thats always nice! And, when I think of Ronon, I think of "kicking booty." So, I thought that went along well.
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Reviewer: Exangeline (Signed)
02 Jul 2007 3:50 am
^///^ This is so damn sweet! I love the prospect of Carson being an Ancient and what you have shown in this story - it's pure genius. Falling in love with Rodney was just a total plus. You are an extremely talented writer with very developed and well-written ideas that can captivate even the hardest fans. To see it being portrayed in such a way is amazing. You're definitely on my favorites list.

Author's Response: Well thankyou very much! Carson is my absolute favorite so...he has to be somewhere in my stories. And, thankyou so much for the compliment! I can only try my best and strive to do better! I cant decide if I should write a sequel to this or pursue a new idea :)
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