Seriously?! Not a single review yet? Huh!
Well, I, for one, am more than just a little intrigued by your "soul-bound" universe. I know I am in love with Angela/Jax. What a complex character you have created there. I was hooked after the first few paragraphs of "Encounter", and "Control" definitely didn't disappoint, either. At first I was a bit put off by the initial first person POV until I realized what you were doing by telling the story from every major character's POV. Not an easy thing to do, and very well executed. I was mesmerized by watching the real Angela slowly reclaim her identity and her control over her life. Love her snark (the "list of doom" for McKay had me in stitches, especially after I so had a few of my own ideas to add when he disrupted Angie and John's little tete-a-tete at the most inopportune time). Loved Ronon's protectiveness and John's struggle to sort out his feelings --- and hey --- who doesn't want to see the softer side of John Sheppard behind all that stoic exterior ... though I do find it hard to believe that either he, or Elizabeth would ever go for the shared relationship experience described in the end. That's just not them. But I guess that's why they call it fiction. It certainly makes for an interesting premise for the next installment, which I am on to read --- right now!!!
Really, really nice job!!!!
Reviews For Control
Reviewer: Astralia441 (Anonymous)
16 Jan 2009 5:47 pm