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Reviewer: paperduckie (Signed)
21 Jul 2007 10:31 pm
Oh my goodness... How beautiful. I love your imagery (worship, possibly) and the last fic was just so very sweet. There are too many quotable, lovely moments to start. There is only one thing, and I mean *only one*, that I would suggest you might want to change; "it hurts in the worst/best" seems, to me, to break the lovely flow of your words. Perhaps a simple "and" would suffice to replace the slash?
Sandcastles
Reviewer: FeDhu (Signed)
02 Jul 2007 1:46 am
The idea of pint sized John and Rodney, arguing and horsing around....is surprisingly sweet. :)
Sandcastles
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
02 Jul 2007 12:46 am
I loved Rodney being all protective of John. Thanks for sharing.
Infinite Which Is Yes
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
30 Jun 2007 10:09 pm
Awwww, that's two very cute little boys. :)
Sandcastles
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
30 Jun 2007 10:05 pm
Sweet and hot. :) Wonder what the bracelet is for?
Infinite Which Is Yes
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
30 Jun 2007 9:41 pm
Oooooooh, John going commando and on a beach. And no shirt with dogtags. Too bad Teyla and Ronon were there. *snickers*
I did mention no shirt. GUH!
Beach Volleyball
Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
30 Jun 2007 7:56 pm
Loved the first two chapters for Rodney's exaggerated concern and John's smirking, the hotness and the sweetness. Loved the third one, because I could just picture it and it made me giggle :).

Laura.
Sandcastles
Reviewer: Truthslove (Signed)
30 Jun 2007 2:11 pm
Your words presented a world so real... it was almost life I was there on the beach with them.... You write sensory so well.... (and "so well" should be in italics, but I couldn't find it at the time, so it's just "so well, but you get it) ;)
Beach Volleyball
Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
30 Jun 2007 10:48 am
Sigh..... how very nice and comfortable and... damn hot! .... a very nice way with words....
Beach Volleyball
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