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Reviewer: Astralia441 (Anonymous)
23 Jan 2009 8:42 am
I love the way you incorporate OC's into your stories so convincingly. Not many writers can do that. I don't think that Ashri was portrayed too goody-two-shoes - she was alien, lovely, and intriguing. I am sorry that people don't acknowledge your beautiful stories with more feedback. I believe it is because you show the softer side of Sheppard and most readers are too used to the brooding stoicism of his character. Also - no slash, which - while I don't mind slash at all - I find a welcome change.
I think you write everyone very well and in character, and I enjoy reading your stories immensely. One tiny side note, if I may --- watch your spelling and grammar (e.g. you're vs. your, and vice versa). Sometimes the devil is in the details and readers get distracted by misspellings. Other than that - great work, and dare I say, very romantic and smoldering.
Thank you for sharing and keep writing, please!!!
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Reviewer: Space1Traveler (Anonymous)
23 Sep 2008 1:41 pm
So good! My heart was in my throat thinking that Ashri was a 'bad guy'. I am so glad she wasn't. But she's preggers isn't she? That's what Carson knows. I'm so glad! I hope there is another stoy about her and John because I'm on my way to look see. How did you come up with her name?
Thanks so much for this fine story. Love it, love it, looooooooove it!

Author's Response: Wow. Thanks for the review (I get so few). I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It was my first venture into SGA fanfic and I was terrified of creating an OC (a "hopefully" non-maryjane) but the story wouldn't go away and Ashri was so close to being an MJ because she had to be so 'good' and loveable, you know. Her orig name wasn't alien enough and when I came up with her parent's backstory I chose to incorporate their names as one.
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