Reviews For Returning Hero

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Reviewer: B_C (Signed)
19 Apr 2009 10:22 pm
Everytime I reread this I get stuck on the quote about the old man in the corner being a Great War veteran, only it's not called that now. Now, it is Part One. I still hear it refeered to as the "Great War" out of respect to the men who died in it. :)
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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
18 Oct 2008 9:25 pm
So sweet! It's funny, McShep is the only ship I can tolerate AUs of -- but I don't just tolerate the AUs, I eat them up! :D I love this idea, think this time period works perfectly for them. :) Made me think of Century Hotel a bit, but yours is much happier!!
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Reviewer: Alynna (Signed)
11 Jul 2007 2:36 am
That was sweet. I have one suggestion: the Air Force didn't become such until 1947. In WWII it was still the Army Air Forces, abbreviated AAF. In the interest of accuracy you may want John to refer to the AAF instead of the Air Force. Here's a brief history:

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it! A couple of people have pointed out the Air Force thing so I'll go back and edit it ;)
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
11 Jul 2007 12:55 am
Oh this was very good! I really enjoyed reading this and I want to thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thanks :D
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Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
11 Jul 2007 12:02 am
Awwww..... they are so cute. WWII is an interesting setting -- nice touch with the vet from WWI.

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
10 Jul 2007 3:23 am
Yup, John is a big girl. That was wonderful and sweet and touching and just...:)
Thanks for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thank you :)
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