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Reviewer: iadorespike (Signed)
15 Jul 2007 10:38 pm
"What about the Major?" Rodney prompted. This whole conversation was becoming more and more surreal and Rodney wanted to know what the Twilight Zone version of Sheppard was like.

"Well," Carson swiveled his head to address Rodney. "His hair was flat."

Perfect...the state of John's hair as a measure of his state of mind. :) Loved that. Tame?! Hmph.

"And needless to say, you two weren't lovers in that universe."

There was a long pause while all parties considered what the doctor had just said. It was broken when Sheppard said, "Excuse me?" and Rodney sputtered, "For God's sake, Carson, the Major and I aren't lovers in THIS universe either!"

"Oh dear, oh dear." Carson's eyes began to well with tears once more. "Don't tell me I've come back to the wrong universe."

Oh! *pets poor Carson* He's a lucky man, though, to have friends put themselves through what Rodney and John go through here all for his sake. *nodnodnod* Oh yes...no doubt. :) Thank-you for this...off to the the next part. :D

Author's Response: I'm afraid I snicker along with Ford everytime I think of the flat hair myself. I'm bad that way! So glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun writing it but then felt obligated to clean up the mess I'd made along the way...
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Reviewer: WolfenMoondaughter (Signed)
15 Jul 2007 1:14 pm
That was delectable! You really had me melting with the whole palm-kiss thing! A clever and imaginative way to get them together! :)
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Reviewer: Fenchurch (Signed)
15 Jul 2007 9:35 am
Good! I mean about part 2 and part 3 being on their way! Oh! And I really liked part 1 too!

Thank you!
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Reviewer: adafrog (Anonymous)
15 Jul 2007 12:39 am
Loved it.
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
14 Jul 2007 8:33 pm
*L* That was cute and of course Rodney put up a fuss. :)

Good to see that at the end it didn't matter. And yay for you continuing it. :)
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
14 Jul 2007 8:33 pm
very clever and very good. I very much enjoyed this story, great job! Thanks for sharing.
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Reviewer: Laura_trekkie (Signed)
14 Jul 2007 8:21 pm
This was fun, but also? I had the overwhelming urge to knock their heads together! *g*. I'm glad they finally ended up on the same page, but, of corse, they couldn't get there without angsting first ;). Loved John's deviousness to use the situation to his (their) advantage.

Laura.
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Reviewer: lavvyan (Signed)
14 Jul 2007 5:19 pm
Aww, this is so cute. :)
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Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
14 Jul 2007 4:08 pm
SO *very* cool. Plausible deniability works wonderfully. Can't wait for the next chapters....

Author's Response: Can't you just see them explaining to Caldwell, "No, see *that* was the time Beckett thought he was stuck in an alternative universe. Gee, Colonel, can't you keep up?"
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