Reviews For Marry-Go-Round

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Reviewer: sgakaz (Anonymous)
26 Mar 2008 2:24 am
John raised his head warily. Someone else? Besides Katie? "Rodney?" he whispered confused.
OH poor John even for a minute thinking there was another rival for Rodney's heart, Rodney leaned in further and pulled John toward him. Rodney brushed his lips across John's and said, "I suspect I'm more than a little in love with you, too." He closed the gap and kissed John firmly. Oh.... John sighed into the kiss and started to kiss Rodney back. And finally realising Rodney was talking about him.
At dinner that night, Rodney leaned in to John and said, "I think that counts as a date, now will you marry me?"
Reviewer: velocitygrass (Signed)
29 Oct 2007 3:30 pm
This was sweet. I really have a thing for Pining!John. And the last line made me smile.

Author's Response: Rodney always makes me smile! Thanks!
Reviewer: gateruner (Signed)
18 Oct 2007 2:28 am
Oh I loved this. That counts as a date? See, I'm making my way through your stories!

Author's Response: Yes, you are and hope you're enjoying them! Thanks!
Reviewer: Dementi (Signed)
25 Sep 2007 6:52 am
This was great! Love the last line!
Reviewer: Manic (Signed)
27 Jul 2007 5:53 am
Oh, I loved Rodney's run-on explanation to John as to why he said "marry me?"

Qoute: Rodney stopped and looked John in the eye and said solemnly, "I always trust you, John."
John's heart clenched. Oh, Rodney.... "
Oh, so sweet and sad.

Quote:At dinner that night, Rodney leaned in to John and said, "I think that counts as a date, now will you marry me

What a great way to bookend it! That was so sweet (I know, I've said that twice already). I enjoyed the characterizations, too. THanks for sharing.

Author's Response: It is fun to be able to bookend things like that..... And run-on seems to be Rodney's usual style... Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
25 Jul 2007 5:54 am
This was nice and very enjoyable, now did John say yes?

Author's Response: We'll see..... ::vbg:: They're up to something...... as always. Thanks!
Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
24 Jul 2007 11:52 pm
Hope there's a sequel. :)

Author's Response: Hmmm... since you ask so nicely.... might not be what you think, however.... that evil plot bunny is loose, you know...
Reviewer: Madison (Signed)
24 Jul 2007 4:16 pm
"There would be endless slivers of used-to-be-John-Sheppard that no one would be able to put back together." I loved that line! Just gorgeous...

Author's Response: Thank you! One of my favorite too!
Reviewer: AtlantisWanderer08 (Anonymous)
24 Jul 2007 3:18 pm
TeeHee! So sweet and romantic! I love, I love!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Yeah, sigh.... the romance is so much fun....
Reviewer: angellec (Signed)
24 Jul 2007 1:41 pm
beautiful you should write more.

Author's Response: Yeah, there's this evil plot bunny wandering about. Someone had already fed it and it's growing.... so there's more coming! Glad you liked it!
Reviewer: lavvyan (Signed)
24 Jul 2007 12:42 pm
Ahaha, cute! That last line made me grin. :)

Author's Response: We may even see an answer..... that evil plot bunny may have one for us all... Thanks! Glad you liked it!
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