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Reviewer: LiSer (Anonymous)
10 Sep 2007 4:21 am
I love this story! Better than the movies, because, let's admit it, the series went downhill after the first movie. The third one just became convoluted nonesense (to me at least).

But your plot! And the way you tied everything together! A different way of getting to Atlantis, the characterization, taking bits of personal information from the series and weaving it into the wonderful, magnificent, marvelous plot. This is definately re-read material.

And...looking at your other work, I almost thought that you absolutely refused to write Bottom!John. Needless to say, I enjoyed this immensely. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! The main reason for writing this was just my frustration with the Matrix movies. Bottom!John... Well, I amazed myself with that:-)
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Reviewer: scififreak (Signed)
05 Aug 2007 5:34 am
Okay, I really liked this. Nice take on what the future might be like hundreds of years after the Truce. But does this mean that Rodney might be the second coming of Neo? Is he the One now? Or is that Avatar!Jackson? lol

Author's Response: Oh! Weeelll.... Neo had his job, and Rodney has his. I've always wondered what Neo actually accomplished to make him the *One*;-) Okay, he was 'talented', but nothing really changed when he did his *thing*, did it?rnrnSo, I think, if Neo was the One, Rodney must be the BIG ONE, and Avatar!Jackson... Okay, he's kind of important, too...rnrnThank you very much for commenting!
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Reviewer: Bettina (Anonymous)
31 Jul 2007 1:44 pm
This was really, really awesome and I enjoyed it a lot!

Author's Response: Thank you! Happy you liked it!
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Reviewer: Mystic (Signed)
30 Jul 2007 5:27 am
LOL, great story and well done. I like your ending a heck of a lot better then the real one of the trilogy. Great story thank you for sharing it.

Author's Response: Thanks! Happy you liked it!
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Reviewer: Goddess47 (Signed)
29 Jul 2007 6:50 pm
You know, not a huge Matrix fan. But this is so cool and nicely done. You've melded the two story lines together very well and maintained the characters. All that and some very hot sex! Good job!

Author's Response: Hi! I've always been a fan of the Matrix universe, but I never grew fond of the characters. Too boring, not a sparkle of personality in sight. So I just put the (in my opinion) interesting ones in there, and voilą. rnrnThank you for commenting!
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Reviewer: B_C (Anonymous)
29 Jul 2007 3:28 am
Reading your story actually makes what little I have seen of the Matrix movies make sense. Thank you. :)

Author's Response: Thank *you*! I just wanted to make the people in the Matrix universe happier!
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