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Reviewer: Dreamer22 (Anonymous)
03 Dec 2007 12:37 am
::snorts:: well done lol

Author's Response: Thank you - third part up soon!
Chapter 2 - Good Guys, Bad Guys
Reviewer: Korilian (Signed)
13 Aug 2007 1:56 pm
I really like your stories, but you have a tendency to give a little to much exposition.

For instance, Rodney going into such detail about why he doesn't have a lot of friends wasn't necesary and a little grating. We already know (or can guess) that Rodney doesn't like to let people get close. We also know he feels strongly about his friendship with Blair, even without reading the earlier fic. His actions tell us that quite clearly.

It's highly unlikely that someone who doesn't let anyone get close, would give so much about himself away. Less is more in this case. You only seem to be having this problem when it comes to Rodney. Probably because he's such a fun character, it becomes tempting to show all the layers.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wasn't entirely happy with those scenes, I wrote them some time ago and Jayne and I should probably have tightened them up. I might try to re-do them some day, but I have to be honest and say that this almost ended up in the not-finished and maybe-never-will-be pile as I in particular got so annoyed with it, so it might be a while before I consider looking at it again! Thank you for your comments though, and I'm glad you like my stories despite this tendency of mine.
Chapter 1 - Back on Earth
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